giving advice

I think the best action you should be is to study hard.
This is two reasons.
First,You might get 550 score on TOEFL to study hard.
Second is important.
If you want to admited by parents,you have to show your parent to your seriousness.
you works hard!! The desire is transmitted.
I wish you got a dream.

part time job

I have a part time job. I work as a home helper.
This job is very hard. I go house and help house work,cooking and cleaning.
But i am happy when housekeeper happy.